Some Structural Aspects of Atlas Shrugged
One of the features of Atlas Shrugged that makes it such an
unusual book, especially for one that is so overwhelmingly popular, is how
highly wrought it is. Whether or not it is true that, as the narrator of
Dostoevsky's Notes from the Underground says, "there are intentional
and unintentional cities," it is certainly true that there are intentional
and unintentional books. And this
is a very intentional book: every
detail in it seems to mean something, to be intended to mean something.
What I want to do here is to describe one of the literary methods by
which Ayn Rand achieves the peculiar meaning-saturation of this book.
In the first chapter of Atlas there is a passage that catches the
reader's eye with its overt symbolism:
It
was a symphony of triumph. The
notes flowed up, they spoke of rising and they were the rising itself, they were
the essence and the form of upward motion, they seemed to embody every human act
and thought that had ascent as the motive.
It was a sunburst of sound, breaking out of hiding and spreading open.
It had the freedom of release and the tension of purpose.
It swept space clean, and left nothing but the joy of an unobstructed
effort. Only a faint echo within
the sounds spoke of that from which the music had escaped, but it spoke in
laughing astonishment at the discovery that there was no ugliness or pain, and
there never had to be. It was a
song of immense deliverance. (13)[i]
In
the second chapter, there is another passage, near enough to the one that I just
quoted that it can echo the first in the reader's mind.
It is the description of the pouring of the first heat of the first order
of Rearden metal:
...
the first break of the liquid metal into the open came as a shocking sensation
of morning. The narrow streak
pouring through space had the pure white color of sunlight. Black coils of steam were boiling upward, streaked with
violent red. Fountains of sparks
shot in beating spasms, as from broken arteries.
The air seemed torn to rags, reflecting a raging flame that was not
there, red blotches whirling and running through space, as if not to be
contained within a man-made structure, as if about to consume the columns, the
girders, the bridges, of cranes overhead. But
the liquid metal had no aspect of violence.
It was a long white curve with the texture of satin and the friendly
radiance of a smile. (28)
The second passage recalls the first because of its striking
similarities: like it, is conveys a strong impression of a morning brightness
emerging from darkness, of violently explosive energy.
On a higher level of abstraction, the impression in both cases is one of
happiness and freedom, of an aspiration which has escaped confinement.
Yet the similarities between the two passages also highlight the
differences. The later passage is
dominated by an image of downward motion, of the liquid metal pouring out of the
furnace, while the earlier one is dominated by images of upward motion. More importantly, the later one is a description of an
industrial and techological artifact and, as such, of something that is placed
by the most familiar ontologies in the realm of the body, while the former is a
description of a work of art, the sort of thing that is conventionally consigned
to the realm of the spirit. This
sense of paradox, or more exactly, of a surprising similarity between opposites,
is underscored by the deliberate paradoxicality of that latter passage, with its
depiction of smiling innocence at the heart of danger and violence.
The reader is prepared for a point of view in which seeming opposites are
deeply connected, in which identity and connection underlie apparent difference
and conflict.
This point is underscored by repeated and prominent doubling of words and
images in the early chapters of Atlas, and by the structure of the
chapters themselves. The first chapter both begins and ends with two identical
lines of dialogue, “Who is John Galt?”
The first occurrence of this line is delivered by an anonymous bum who
never reappears, and the second by Owen Kellog, a talented young worker who has
inexplicably resigned. The very
title of this chapter, “The Theme,” has a double reference: it could refer to the musical theme describe in the
passage I quoted above or, we realize later, it could refer to the single line
that begins and ends the chapter. The
second chapter, “The Chain,” begins with the metal-pouring scene from which
I have quoted, and we soon find out that the first thing made of the metal being
poured is a small chain that Rearden gives to his wife.
In the last line of the same chapter, his wife is describing the same
chain, characterized at the beginning in terms of radiance and freedom, as
“the chain by which [Rearden] holds us all in bondage” (43).
It is in the third chapter that this structural feature, the two ends
united by similarity and yet contrasting, is the most pronounced and obvious.
The title of the chapter is “The Top and the Bottom,” and it begins
in a dark, low-ceilinged, cellar-like room that actually is actually an
expensive barroom on the top of a skyscraper.
The bureaucrats and corporate executives who are secretly meeting there
are at the top of their socio-political system in terms of power over it, though
morally they are close to its bottom. The
chapter ends with a scene in the employees’ cafeteria in Taggart
Transcontinental, a sparkling, high-ceilinged room with “a sense of space and
light” (62), but which is in fact underground.
Only two men are meeting there, Dagny Taggart’s unprepossessing
assistant Eddie Willers and an anonymous worker in grease-stained clothes, who
we find out hundreds of pages later is the John Galt referred to at the
beginning and end of the first chapter. These
two men are near the bottom of the system as far as political power and prestige
are concerned, though morally they represent its highest and best.
This particular sort of formal organization does not persist beyond the
early chapters of the book, and would become rather oppressive if it did.[ii]
However, as features of the early chapters, they are enough to cue the
reader, from the outset, to be attentive to the dominant structural feature of
the book: the “twinning” as I would call it, of meaning-bearing elements
that are linked by salient similarities and at the same time opposed to one
another in potentially significant- ways. Once
the reader’s attention becomes open to it, this feature becomes omnipresent;
never oppressive, but insistent enough to constantly influence the process of
understanding.
The book contains, to begin with some of the less important examples, two
marriages, both of which are oppressive and dysfunctional.[iii]
They contrast, though, in that each as it were reverses the sex roles of
the other: in one, the woman (Lillian Rearden) is the oppressor, while in the
other it is the man (James Taggart). There
are two steel magnates: one (Rearden) is a self-made man who has contributed a
fundamentally new product to the economy, and the other (Boyle) who got his
start with lavish government grants and has swallowed many small enterprises.
Two contrasting sub-plots deal with two lines of the Taggart railroad:
one, the John Galt Line, serves the vibrant community around Wyatt Junction in
Colorado, while the other serves the squalidly socialist People’s State of
Mexico. Two of the memorable action
set-pieces of the book are train rides. In
one, Dagny and Rearden ride with breathtaking speed up into the mountain heights
of Wyatt Junction. The other,
dominated by the juvenile, bullying bureaucrat Kip Chalmers, chugs laboriously
down into the depths of the earth, toward death.
The second ride is clearly cross-referenced to the first: the last thing
the passengers see “on earth” as their train is swallowed by the Winston
tunnel is the distant light of Wyatt’s Torch.
In a different way, the John Galt ride is twinned with another ride on
the same line: in this one, Dagny rides alone and, instead of meeting a jubilant
crowd at Wyatt Junction, finds a panicky mob and, in the distance, the burning
ruins of the Wyatt oil fields. James
Taggart’s Hellish relationship with Cheryl Brooks is twinned with Dagny’s
affair with Rearden, which is consummated at the same time the James meets
Cheryl (in both cases, in the wake of the triumphant John Galt ride).
The novel has two major characters with mixed premises, some sound and
some unsound: Henry Rearden and Dr. Robert Stadler.
These characters contrast in terms of the way in which they develop:
Rearden develops in the direction of goodness and enlightenment, and Stadler in
the direction of evil and confusion. There
are also two physicists in the novel: Galt is a an individualist who refuses to
work for the government and ultimately revolts against it, and Stadler
cooperates with the government’s attempt to nationalize and monopolize
scientific inquiry in the hands of the State Science Institute.
Both physicists are closely associated with a single invention, though
the nature of invention as well as the nature of the character’s association
with it is sharply different in the two cases.
Galt develops a new conception of energy as a means to creating his
technological device. Stadler, who
despises technology, develops his theory of cosmic rays – a subject that seems
to have no technological implications – and ignores the workers at the State
Science Institute who use his theory as a means to developing a new device for
purposes of their own. The two
inventions also have opposite characteristics.
Galt’s device is a generator, which converts static energy into
kinetic, while the Stadler device is a destroyer, a weapon of mass destruction,
which turns living beings and human artifacts into shapeless mush.
One converts the static into the dynamic, and the other, so to speak,
reverses the process. The book also has two utopian communities, both described in
some detail. One is individualist
and one is collectivist, one heavenly and one hellish.
It also has two philosophers and two composers, each pair a study in very
sharp contrasts. There are two
institutions that are dedicated to the pursuit of knowledge.
The name of one of them contains a reference to Patrick Henry, a symbol
of freedom, and the name of the other contains a reference to the state.
Of course, these structural features of the book are not ends in
themselves, nor are they inserted for the sake of some formalistic conception of
beauty. In some cases, they serve
to promote characterization or plot development.
For instance, Dagny’s second ride on the John Galt Line, and the fact
that it repeats the first with a dramatic difference, serves to emphasize an
important plot point: the triumph
of the John Galt Line has come to nought. It
thereby indirectly brings out a point that is thematically important as well:
namely, the fact that the events dramatized by the first one, and in particular
the fact that Dagny and Rearden lent their productive talents to the support of
the increasingly corrupt system, have actually contributed to causing the
disaster revealed in the second, the destruction of the Colorado industrial
community.
However, most of these instances of mirroring-with-a-difference serve to
lead the reader directly into the ideas that drive the narrative and everything
in it. The two parallel descriptive
passages I quoted at the outset implicitly make a theoretical claim that
gradually becomes explicit as the novel unfolds: namely, the claim that there is
a deep connection between the realm of art and that of industry and technology,
and more fundamentally between those of the body and of the spirit.
A related thematic claim is embodied in another pair of mirroring and
contrasting passages. Francisco
D’Anconia makes two philosophical speeches, both aimed at his “greatest
conquest,” the mind of Henry Rearden, and like the above two passages they
also stand in sharp contrast, though in a different way.
One is his speech on the nature of money (Part II, Ch. 2), and the other
is his speech on the nature of sex (II, 4).
Here the contrast is in the subject matters of the passages: both money
and sex are consigned by conventional ontologies to the realm of the body, but
to radically different and sharply contrasting aspects of the physical side of
existence. The two speeches are,
however, closely related, in part by the fact that they share to a considerable
extent the same logical structure: both explain their allegedly brute, physical
subject-matter as rooted in the mind. Money
is a consequence of the mind’s capacity to produce, and sex is a consequence
of our vision of our highest values and our conception of our relation to these
values (that is, our self-esteem or the lack of it).
Further, both speeches develop the thesis that people who in either case
seek the effect without the cause, money without being productive or sex without
having self-esteem, then the effect will only be to hasten their destruction.
These two examples of the twinning device suggest a somewhat broader
thesis about how it functions in achieving the author’s purposes.
As most of her readers know, a few years after publishing Atlas,
Rand worked out an epistemological theory which was based on the idea that some
non-nominalist solution to the problem of universals must be true or knowledge
itself would be impossible. Like
any epistemology that is based on this idea, it places a peculiar sort of
emphasis on consciousness of similarities: an indispensable component of
knowledge is finding real similarities between things, common attributes that
the things possess (though in different degree) that indicate that the things
are of the same kind.[iv]
One of the results accomplished by Rand’s twinning device is the
directing of the attention the book’s readers in a way that invites them to
make this sort of mental integration. Despite
what you might think, a concerto and a new metal alloy are really instances of
one kind of thing – the achievements of the human spirit.
The fact that the two marriages in the book parallel parallel one another
encourages the reader to focus on what is essential to them: the similar
techniques employed by the two oppressors involved (James and Lillian) and to
abstract from what is inessential (the genders of the oppressors).
The real beauty of the twinning device, however, is that in addition to
prompting the reader to note similarities it is equally well suited to provoking
them to carry out a seemingly opposite sort of mental process, one that
according to the same family of epistemological theories, is also indispensable
for the creation of human knowledge. If
it is true that the foundation of knowledge is the noting of similarities that
aims at discerning real categories of things, then the mind must also distinguish
each category from others.[v]
The essential complement of noting real similarities is noting real
differences. The fact that Rearden
and Boyle, Galt and Stadler, are in certain salient respects similar throws a
glaring light on their far more important differences.
The fact that the two utopian communities have such different
results compels the reader to consider the underlying differences that
explain them. These distinctions
that the reader makes in these cases are of course thematically central to Atlas.
Part of the power and the philosophical interest of Dostoevsky’s Brothers
Karamazov lie in the way its plot construction places the reader in a
position that mimics the thought processes recommended by the author’s
epistemological views. We know that
Dimitri did not kill his father. But
his behavior and the trail of evidence he leaves behind him say otherwise. The Prosecutor, using his brilliant human reason, shreds the
arguments presented by the defense. The
only characters who look at the evidence and reach the correct conclusion are
the two who love Dimitri: Alyosha and Grushenka. We, the readers, find ourselves thinking that, as these two
characters look at the evidence, they are seeing it in the right way.
Though it is clearly possible to see the evidence as the Prosecutor sees
it, their way really does seem better. Though
they are going by “faith” rather than reason, they seem to know the
truth. And we find ourselves hoping
that the simple peasants on the jury will follow their hearts and ignore the
beguiling sophistries of the prosecution. We
find ourselves, in other words, thinking as Dostoevsky says we should think.
In a similar way, Rand structures Atlas in a way the gets the
reader’s mind to mimic the sort of functioning that her epistemology treats as
the best. Of course, this sort of
mental functioning is one that is diametrically opposed to Dostoevsky’s
mysticism.[vi]
Her reader is immersed in a world in which rationality is possible and,
indeed, is the best way to function. It
is rewarded at every turn with new discoveries and new connections between them.
[i] Citations to Atlas will be in parentheses, giving the page number in the first hardbound edition: Atlas Shrugged (New York: Random House, 1957).
[ii] To be more exact, it tapers off, rather than ending abruptly. Chapter IV, “The Immovable Movers,” begins and ends with sentences about what it is that moves the world, sentences that seem to give sharply different accounts of the matter.
[iii] Rather curiously, there is in all of Rand’s works no full-length portrait of a successful marriage. In The Fountainhead, it is true, Dominique and Howard are married, but the book ends immediately afterward.
[iv] Ayn Rand, Introduction to Objectivist Epistemology (New York: The Objectivist, 1967), pp. 16 and 17, and Ch. 2, passim.
[v] Introduction to Objectivist Epistemology, pp. 40 and 41, and Ch. 5 passim.
[vi] The relations between Dostoevsky and Rand deserve to be explored more fully than they have hitherto. To a considerable extent, the relation between them seems to be a beautiful example of negative influence: on crucial matters, her views look like inversions of his.